dear Omar I like how you use the word soft.It will be better if you use more powerful word.FROM riyan well done.
Dear Omar I realy enjoyed your work. I liked it because it had loads of dicripetive words and it was realy good .
Next time make sure that you don’t make everything capitals.
Nice work Omar but it could of bean better if you thank of another word for juicy. But great work.
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dear Omar I like how you use the word soft.It will be better if you use more powerful word.FROM riyan well done.
Dear Omar
I realy enjoyed your work. I liked it because it had loads of dicripetive words and it was realy good .
Next time make sure that you don’t make everything capitals.
Nice work Omar but it could of bean better if you thank of another word for juicy. But great work.