I really liked your post it was interesting.So you like the x2014 well i like the bagetie viron5.I think that you should have spelt expensive right.Apart from that it was a good post.
Dear kai
well done i learnt alot about the fast car x2014 .The things I liked about your writing is you changed the the the type of font
it would be better if you used more colour’s .
I think your writing is good, because you written what you like and then you written why. I think that you could improuve it by writing a little bit about your self.
Dear Kai thanks for telling me about the x2014 i might get gran turismo just to see that car :),EBI with that type of writing you gotta make more than one space maybe 3 spaces.
dear Kai
I like your writing because it showed what you liked.
But you could have evry thing the same coulour.
DEAR KAI,
I really liked your post it was interesting.So you like the x2014 well i like the bagetie viron5.I think that you should have spelt expensive right.Apart from that it was a good post.
Dear kai
well done i learnt alot about the fast car x2014 .The things I liked about your writing is you changed the the the type of font
it would be better if you used more colour’s .
I think your writing is good, because you written what you like and then you written why. I think that you could improuve it by writing a little bit about your self.
Dear Kai thanks for telling me about the x2014 i might get gran turismo just to see that car :),EBI with that type of writing you gotta make more than one space maybe 3 spaces.
From Norbert