Great story sameha, you used some great adjectives.
WWW:Good connectives EBI:Add a couple more adj
wow well done, Sameha! Very jolly well done maybe bring more words to make people want to read, more!
This is a very good piece of work Sameha! Just remember capital letters for I!!!
I really like how you added different types of puctuations
next time try and add some questions like rhetorical ones. also check your spelling e.g Doctor, I
other than that your story was really good!!
Gizem
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Great story sameha, you used some great adjectives.
WWW:Good connectives
EBI:Add a couple more adj
wow well done, Sameha! Very jolly well done maybe bring more words to make people want to read, more!
This is a very good piece of work Sameha! Just remember capital letters for I!!!
I really like how you added different types of puctuations
next time try and add some questions like rhetorical ones.
also check your spelling e.g Doctor, I
other than that your story was really good!!
Gizem