Well done Zelal you have decribed your dad very good and use good openers as well. Next time check because you started at a small letter.
I like the atmosphere of this.
Next time use a bettter adverb that make sense than I walked sleepily.
You wrote so good on the other hand make sure your speech marks are in the right place. from:Tim
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Well done Zelal you have decribed your dad very good and use good openers as well.
Next time check because you started at a small letter.
I like the atmosphere of this.
Next time use a bettter adverb that make sense than I walked sleepily.
You wrote so good on the other hand make sure your speech marks are in the right place.
from:Tim