about my favorite football team

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  1. Valentina says:

    Dear Andrei,

    You used a capital letter to start your writing and remembered to use a capital letter to write in the first person.
    Next time make sure you punctuate your sentences with a full stop. Please also check the word gona- you could write going to.
    All the best with your next piece of writing!
    Valentina

  2. Leonzjay says:

    Dear Andrei
    You did very well but insded of gona you could put going to.

  3. megan says:

    I like the way you use a different hand writing

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