Well done, you have started most of your sentences with a capital letter, you also used some adjectives.
Next time make sure your text box doesn’t go over the page as some of your writing has been cut off.
Dear Basiira,
That was amazing. You have spelt hard words right e.g: Probably, whenever, thirsty and check your senteces. Next time you can write more, but over all it was fabulous.
Dear Basiira,
Well done, you have started most of your sentences with a capital letter, you also used some adjectives.
Next time make sure your text box doesn’t go over the page as some of your writing has been cut off.
Good luck with your next piece of writing.
Valentina
DEAR BASIRA
GOOD WRITING BUT REMBER TO PUT FULL STOPS BY
FROM CALITHA
Dear Basiira,
That was amazing. You have spelt hard words right e.g: Probably, whenever, thirsty and check your senteces. Next time you can write more, but over all it was fabulous.
Esraxx