Hello Taj,
You have created a great entry this week Taj. You have definitely incorporated many of the senses. I can only imagine the smell! Your entry flowed very well and you have slowed down the story to build the tension. Great job Taj.
Mrs Scharf
Team 100WC
North Qld, Australia
Hello Taj,
You have created a great entry this week Taj. You have definitely incorporated many of the senses. I can only imagine the smell! Your entry flowed very well and you have slowed down the story to build the tension. Great job Taj.
Mrs Scharf
Team 100WC
North Qld, Australia
Dear Taj
I like that you did lots of adjectives.you did a fantastic job.Next time write how you solve the promblem.Like when
you take away he smelly shoes.
From Haadi