The fire

Posted on October 17, 2014 by Deleted User
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One Response to The fire

  1. Jessica Bailey says:
    October 24, 2014 at 12:43 pm

    Wow! I loved the cliffhanger you left at the end, it really had a powerful impact on your writing. Next time perhaps you could try and make your sentences shorter! Well done 😉

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