Really good story! The writing had really good vocabulary that really made the atmosphere come to life! Maybe next time try and use ‘my friend and I’ insted of ‘me and my friend’ Well done! 🙂
Gizem you wrote a nice piece of work. Next time write what did you smell.
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Really good story! The writing had really good vocabulary that really made the atmosphere come to life! Maybe next time try and use ‘my friend and I’ insted of ‘me and my friend’ Well done! 🙂
Gizem you wrote a nice piece of work. Next time write what did you smell.