The Excellent New Player!

Posted on October 18, 2014 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The Excellent New Player!

  1. Bilvi says:
    October 20, 2014 at 12:34 pm

    I like the excitment that you used in atmosphere.

    Next time check your spelling like billient to brilliant.

  2. Aesrom says:
    October 20, 2014 at 12:43 pm

    you used amazing adjectives to describe the mood and atmosphere but you could of used adverbs to describe the people

  3. Burakarif says:
    October 20, 2014 at 5:05 pm

    You used different types of punctuations to interest the reader

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