Well done Arda,
This is a descriptive piece of writing and I like the way you enlarged the text in the final sentence to create suspense. Next time use a question mark for questions.
Well done, Arda for entering this week’s 100WC. You have thought carefully about the prompt picture and written your 100wc accordingly. I like how you made the word “DEATH” larger to stand out. The font you used, however, was quite difficult to read; maybe you could change this in your next 100wc. I hope you continue to enter.
Well done Arda,
This is a descriptive piece of writing and I like the way you enlarged the text in the final sentence to create suspense. Next time use a question mark for questions.
All the best with the next 100wc!
Valentina
Well done, Arda for entering this week’s 100WC. You have thought carefully about the prompt picture and written your 100wc accordingly. I like how you made the word “DEATH” larger to stand out. The font you used, however, was quite difficult to read; maybe you could change this in your next 100wc. I hope you continue to enter.