Hi Charles, I like the introduction to your story. You described the setting well. My favourite sentence is – The wrinkly man laughed slowly. This sentence really makes me wonder what the man was up to. Well done and keep writing.
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Hi Charles, I like the introduction to your story. You described the setting well. My favourite sentence is – The wrinkly man laughed slowly. This sentence really makes me wonder what the man was up to. Well done and keep writing.