Hemish a good attempt to use the image to write about the statue. You set the scene in the park well by saying that you have never seen it before even though you always go to the park. I think you were very brave to sneak out a night – I think I would have been too scared! Read through your writing carefully or ask someone to read it aloud to you so that you can hear how it sounds and if every sentence makes complete sense.
Good luck with your writing.
Mrs Williams (Team 100WC) UK
Hemish a good attempt to use the image to write about the statue. You set the scene in the park well by saying that you have never seen it before even though you always go to the park. I think you were very brave to sneak out a night – I think I would have been too scared! Read through your writing carefully or ask someone to read it aloud to you so that you can hear how it sounds and if every sentence makes complete sense.
Good luck with your writing.
Mrs Williams (Team 100WC) UK