Taj I enjoyed reading your story this week – there is obviously more to this story!
I liked your twist at the beginning with the statue hurling the eggs….. very creative writing.
Try to check for possessives such as in ‘someone’s’ and ‘person’s’.
Keep on writing.
Taj I enjoyed reading your story this week – there is obviously more to this story!
I liked your twist at the beginning with the statue hurling the eggs….. very creative writing.
Try to check for possessives such as in ‘someone’s’ and ‘person’s’.
Keep on writing.