What an interesting 100 Word Challenge. Using almost entirelly speech can be a very effective way to tell a story. You must be careful to also include some description as to how the speaker speaks. For example with fear or surprise, otherwise you cannot tell what the characters are feeling. Also it is very important to use correct punctuation, such as capital letters.
As a mother I would probably think my son was telling fibs too….I wonder what the figure wanted?
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What an interesting 100 Word Challenge. Using almost entirelly speech can be a very effective way to tell a story. You must be careful to also include some description as to how the speaker speaks. For example with fear or surprise, otherwise you cannot tell what the characters are feeling. Also it is very important to use correct punctuation, such as capital letters.
As a mother I would probably think my son was telling fibs too….I wonder what the figure wanted?
Keep up the good work.