Dear Taj ,
I can tell that you learnt a lot about anacondas and I love some of the technical vocabulary that you used. However, I would have liked to have read more and you need to remember your ? and try to use some connectives in your writing.
Tamsin
Wow you must know alot about anacondas. They must be your faviroute animal.
hey taj good job with your work next time use more exclamation marks
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Dear Taj ,
I can tell that you learnt a lot about anacondas and I love some of the technical vocabulary that you used. However, I would have liked to have read more and you need to remember your ? and try to use some connectives in your writing.
Tamsin
Wow you must know alot about anacondas. They must be your faviroute animal.
hey taj good job with your work next time use more exclamation marks