Your writing is very nice and descriptive.
WWW. You used adverbs. E.g. Easily
EBI. Instead of using just adjectives, use a simile. E.g. The bridge is as rusty as an old car engine.
Overall, I really liked your piece. It was very descriptive 😉
well done you did some good work but please check your spellings like easylly which is easily and also your capital letter an apostrophes are in the wrong place but over all it was good 🙂
Your writing is very nice and descriptive.
WWW. You used adverbs. E.g. Easily
EBI. Instead of using just adjectives, use a simile. E.g. The bridge is as rusty as an old car engine.
Overall, I really liked your piece. It was very descriptive 😉
WOUNDERFUL PEASE you’ve used lots of adjectives.
Are you sure the brige small.
Fantastic adjectives and adverbs!
well done you did some good work but please check your spellings like easylly which is easily and also your capital letter an apostrophes are in the wrong place but over all it was good 🙂