Wow, sudhee how amazing is that? its so good!
Thank you Alexia.
I liked your writting about the brige. It would be even better if you can add more adverbs.
Thank you and I will try and use more adverbs.
Good adjectives and adverbs you really describe the bridge .
Thank you for the complement Jesica, but can you tell me what I could improve.
it was a great descriptive story but describe what color the bridge . For an example the bridge half eaten and it is caramel color going half way through the river
Alright I will next time describe the colour of the bridge.
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Wow, sudhee how amazing is that? its so good!
Thank you Alexia.
I liked your writting about the brige. It would be even better if you can add more adverbs.
Thank you and I will try and use more adverbs.
Good adjectives and adverbs you really describe the bridge .
Thank you for the complement Jesica, but can you tell me what I could improve.
it was a great descriptive story but describe what color the bridge . For an example the bridge half eaten and it is caramel color going half way through the river
Alright I will next time describe the colour of the bridge.