I liked the description in your work but you need to improve on your capital letters and your spelling.
You used describing words to describe the setting of your story. You can change your writing by adding some punctuation and changing your spellings. Like it was instead of it woz.
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I liked the description in your work but you need to improve on your capital letters and your spelling.
You used describing words to describe the setting of your story.
You can change your writing by adding some punctuation and changing your spellings.
Like it was instead of it woz.