I like that you talked about what football team you like and the way you wrote your blog.
I liked how you talked about your football team.
It would of been better if you wrote more.
by Robert
You used your adjectives well and I really like when you said faith in them. Instead of a comma I think you should use a full stop.
Thanks Zelal I will edit it when I have time.
I really liked your writing . I also support arsenal i do agree with you that arsenal do lose a lot of matches .But i still like arsenal my family also support arsenal they are the best come on arsenal you could do better
Thank you and I agree they could do better.
hi Daniel i like arsenal a bit they did lose some games but you do need to write a bit more.
Me to ok I will try to write more
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I like that you talked about what football
team you like and the way you wrote your
blog.
I liked how you talked about your football team.
It would of been better if you wrote more.
by Robert
You used your adjectives well and I really like when you said faith in them.
Instead of a comma I think you should use a full stop.
Thanks Zelal I will edit it when I have time.
I really liked your writing . I also support arsenal i do agree with you that arsenal do lose a lot of matches .But i still like arsenal my family also support arsenal they are the best come on arsenal you could do better
Thank you and I agree they could do better.
hi Daniel
i like arsenal a bit they did lose some games but you do need to write a bit more.
Me to ok I will try to write more