I like the languge that you used.
Only if you used about what team you like and so on.
I think you have choosed your words corectly and i like the way you wrote it neatly and clear knew the fact but i liked it
To Robert,
I like your writing because it is clear to read and another thing you put good tecnickes but can you put more effort into your work.
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Vishnu
nice description about about football that i din’t know.what a well explanation Robert.
Great use of words and conectives make the title a different color
I really like your description.I think there’s no criticism necessary.
great use of words and adverbs as well.next time more facts.
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I like the languge that you used.
Only if you used about what team you like and so on.
I think you have choosed your words corectly and i like the way you wrote it neatly and clear knew the fact but i liked it
To Robert,
I like your writing because it is clear to read and another thing you put good tecnickes
but can you put more effort into your work.
by,
Vishnu
nice description about about football that i din’t know.what a well explanation Robert.
Great use of words and conectives
make the title a different color
I really like your description.I think there’s no criticism necessary.
great use of words and adverbs as well.next time more facts.