Dear George,
Well done, you varied your sentence openers and included enough detail to grab the readers attention.
All the best with the next 100WC!
Valentina
DEAR valentina thanks for this coment I will try and do this in the feutre
Dear George i like that you varied your sentence openers and described it very well. I like your reference to lord of the rings. Good luck with the 100 word challenge.
TO Jake thanks for the reply about my reference to one of our faveroute film
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Dear George,
Well done, you varied your sentence openers and included enough detail to grab the readers attention.
All the best with the next 100WC!
Valentina
DEAR valentina thanks for this coment I will try and do this in the feutre
Dear George i like that you varied your sentence openers and described it very well. I like your reference to lord of the rings. Good luck with the 100 word challenge.
TO Jake thanks for the reply about my reference to one of our faveroute film