That’s really good work but in the part you said you and your friend went for a walk you forgot a comma before “we heard”. Also your forgot your speech marks after CAN!!! and YOU!!! Otherwise good work!! 😉
I like your work. The reason I like it is because I love Halloween. I sometimes get that feeling too but it is not true or maybe it could be true! Next time check your work because it does not make sense.
That’s really good work but in the part you said you and your friend went for a walk you forgot a comma before “we heard”. Also your forgot your speech marks after CAN!!! and YOU!!! Otherwise good work!! 😉
Well done Suela it was a very good story. But when you use diolage remember to close the diolage as well.
Nice work Suela! But you should check your work because some of it doesn’t make sense!! Best Wishes Maria Carla!!
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This is a really good piece of writing but some parts don’t make sense and you need to add more full stops 😀
I like your work. The reason I like it is because I love Halloween. I sometimes get that feeling too but it is not true or maybe it could be true! Next time check your work because it does not make sense.