Dear Kolade,
Well done, your writing is very descriptive. Make sure names begin with a capital letter. Also please make sure you publish your writing under your class name.
All the best with the next piece of writing.
Valentina
Nice writing next time put a capital for Essex and to improve your writing you should post it o your class name not news.
From,Hemish
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Dear Kolade,
Well done, your writing is very descriptive. Make sure names begin with a capital letter.
Also please make sure you publish your writing under your class name.
All the best with the next piece of writing.
Valentina
Dear Kolade,
Nice writing next time put a capital for Essex and to improve your writing you should post it o your class name not news.
From,Hemish