Hi Joshua
That was a scary story and showed your good imagination.
You used good descriptive words to creat that scary feeling.
You need to check your spelling when you finish your stories.
sole/soul, yo/so, usualu/usually, eccept/except…and remember a capital I.
I enjoyed your story very much.
Well done!
Greg T
Hi Joshua
That was a scary story and showed your good imagination.
You used good descriptive words to creat that scary feeling.
You need to check your spelling when you finish your stories.
sole/soul, yo/so, usualu/usually, eccept/except…and remember a capital I.
I enjoyed your story very much.
Well done!
Greg T