Semanur it was great. But you have made lots of mistakes e.g Finally at home. You have to check your spelling and sentenses all the time at least 3 time. What you needed to do was put in the statue in your story. You could put the statue were you wrote I went to the park. But over all it was amazing.
Semanur it was great. But you have made lots of mistakes e.g Finally at home. You have to check your spelling and sentenses all the time at least 3 time. What you needed to do was put in the statue in your story. You could put the statue were you wrote I went to the park. But over all it was amazing.
Esraxx
It was nice!
But can you add more adjectives.